Thursday, May 14, 2009

The cave

There are 5 friend s Faye, John, Daniela, Tyler, and David is in their boat. Tyler sees cave. he asked. They drive the boat to the cave. They went into the cave. It was very dark. But soon they can see. There are many interesting things in the cave. There are olds things .why are these thing s in the cave? John. I think this is somebody live in the cave. The water is high now. The boat cannot get out of the cave. Says Faye. The water doesn’t come up to here. See? These things are not wet. Tyler looks around the cave. He tells everyone . Looks we can go out of her. There is door. The door is too heavy and very old. They can‘t open. John. I saw old key may be whit. The door is open with old key. They go to home.

Dark
Wet
Cave
Heavy
Key

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  2. 100% This is very good, but next time you need to tell where you found this story--the name of the book, magazine, newspaper, SRA or web site. Otherwise you will lose 10%.

    Next time you should also choose more difficult vocabulary words. I think you already know these words.

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